The drafting process was important because...
Draft 1:
This is the firstt draft that me and my group have came up with. What we have looked deeply into is the colour scheme as you can see from our draft,is we went with a black and white theme to stnd out to the audience.
The positve criticism:
Areas to improve:
the disadvantages of this is that the audience wouldn't be able to see the typography in this advert , that much because it isn't that clear, all so the artist of the name is not very clear which we would need to work on
Draft 2
The second draft what me and my group have came up is similar but a different picture and we have more information about the artist and we have made it more clear to the audience
The Position Criticisms:
- Image creates a star appeal
- Typography is more clearer
Areas of improve :
- The colour scheme compliments this genre
- The layout need to be better
Tre, evidence here of the drafting process that you went through for your advert. Some discussion on the criticisms that you recieved.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-you need to finish the opening paragraph that you seem to start but not finish
-for your first draft, include your positive criticisms
-for your second draft, the areas of improvement need to be looked as one is a positive comment
-discuss how overall this process has been beneficial