Friday, 20 December 2013

Planning :Outline Narrative

My group and I  have highlighted thelfollowing  sections of the lyrics, to create awareness of the  performance sections, with the artist singing. Also to show us what part the dancers will be needed. This will ensure that the audience are not confused as a result of the different storylines.

We have split the song into sections  and colour coded what parts are for the narrative and the performance of the artist. Our aim for the artist is to use him in  different shots and clothing, singing the song  whilst portraying his values and ideologies. The themes that we are going to use include  love.    

Performance: Green
Narrative: Yellow
Concept : Red  

Intro
I knew just what I had to be
When I heard you say what you said to me
To every dude in sight
Look like you working up an appetite for the night, check it
By then I just sat at the back
Peeping you out, the way you act
It was drinking time, getting out of line
And I'm taking you back at your place
All is well and all is cool
Stay in your place, don't be no fool
We'll get along alright
You look like the type that would try to fight
Best off being a friend to me
You don't want to offend me
Better play it cool, don't know what I might do


[x4]

I knew just what I had to be


When I heard you say what you said to me, baby girl

Appetite for the night, check it


I knew just what I had to be

When I heard you say what you said to me, baby girl


I knew just what I had to be

When I heard you say what you said to me, baby girl

Appetite for the night, check it


I knew just what I had to be

When I heard you say what you said to me, baby girl





outro

What i feel the song is about is about a relationship and   the artist is confused of what he might do in this siutation so what is the name of the single


3 comments:

  1. Trey, good that you have looked at your lyrics and analyse where you want certain thigs to happen by including your key.

    To improve;
    -after your lyrics, comment on what you think the song is about
    -what themes are apparent through your lyrics
    -explain the narrative idea
    -explain the performance idea

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  2. Not all the changes have been made.

    To improve;
    -after your lyrics, comment on what you think the song is about
    -what themes are apparent through your lyrics

    ReplyDelete